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I dig it, and seeing as it's the first page, I understand you'll expand on what's going on.
It is a little sketchy, like Dood said, but the concept is solid and you did a good job with the dialogue. I saw you meant for it to be sketchy, but if you can do clean lines its honestly better to do them, because sketchy can be fun to look at but overall not as professional. The eyes in the last two panels are good, but make sure you don't make the pupils too different in size or it can look strange.
But mainly, it's a very clear and interesting opening overall!
It is a little sketchy, like Dood said, but the concept is solid and you did a good job with the dialogue. I saw you meant for it to be sketchy, but if you can do clean lines its honestly better to do them, because sketchy can be fun to look at but overall not as professional. The eyes in the last two panels are good, but make sure you don't make the pupils too different in size or it can look strange.
But mainly, it's a very clear and interesting opening overall!